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Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:25 pm
It doesn't take a lot of brain,
and even less of muscle,
all you need is an open-mind,
free from hustle-n-bustle,
take some innocence and curiosity,
and add it to the sink,
so grab a pen and paper,
and pour out what you think.


Eh, not much of a fan. =/ My meters off.
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Fri Jul 17, 2009 9:17 am
The beat gets thrown off a few times, though I did particularly like the first two verses best. The idea is a good one, perhaps if just a few words were added or subtracted to keep the flow of the rhythm?
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